雅思作文-100句第6次课76-90句翻译

2024年1月31日发(作者：)

76. 免费上大学使得家景不好的学生有同等的上学机会

正确的句子：Free university education makes it possible for students from less well-off

backgrounds to have equal access to tertiary education.

我的句子：Free tuition fees encourages主谓不一致 students from poor families to have the

equal opportunity to access to education. （have equal opportunities to receive an education）

形式主语：It is possible for students from less well-off backgrounds to have equal access to

tertiary education due to free university education.

Have equal access to 对..有平等机会

Access 不可数n 前面不用加定冠词或不定冠词。 等同available

Have easy access to 更容易

Access （v）接触到…信息 动词形式用的较少

上大学：Higher education / university education / college education

Free tuition不可数美式 /free tuition fees 英式可数/ Free university education 免费上大学

from less well-off backgrounds 省略who are 家境不好 或disadvantaged / deprived穷

well-off backgrounds 家境好

The student 表示特指 没有必要 用students

情态动词Can 后接动词原形do 改为afford

Have equally chance 此处equally是副词 不修饰名词 应改为equal 且本句语意不对，应改为to study at university

改：Free college education allows students who cannot afford tuition fees to have an equal

chance to study at university.

主谓不一致

Students前不用加the

Get equal access to 不准确 一般用have

改：Free university education allows students from disadvantaged backgrounds to have equal

access to education.

定语从句没有谓语 应加are

Make it possible for sb to have an education/ receive an equal education

改：Free university education can make it possible for students who are from disadvantaged to

have an equal education.

77. 很多人觉得自己有必要赶时尚。

正确的句子：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion.

我的句子：A large number of people think it is necessary to chase 不要直译fashion.

形式主语：It is necessary for people to follow fashion 但是没有体现觉得的意思

觉得：Consider / think

赶时尚：Follow fashion / keep up with fashion/keep up to date with fashion

不时髦：Out of fashion / behind the curve（非正式，可以用在口语里）

Feel it necessary 直译 feel 用在feel comfortable 较合适 应用think or consider

改：Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion.

没有sb is necessary to do sth这种表达

一般catch the train较多 书面语一般不用catch fashion.

改：Many people think it necessary to keep up with fashion

78. 经费削减让很多年轻人很难接受大学教育。

正确的句子：Budget cuts make it difficult for many young people to receive a college

education.

我的句子：Budget cuts make it hard for young people to receive the (a) university education.

削减经费：Budget cuts （n）主语是复数，谓语动词为原型 / cutting the budget 谓语动词为单数

Budget 自己或组织可用的钱 预算 可数n

State budget 政府经费 Within budget 预算之内

live on a tight budget 生活很困苦

穷游：budget travel

Cut（cn） 表示reduction时，有词伙：tax/job/spending/pay cuts 一般用复数形式

Discourage 不鼓励 v

没有budget reduce 用budget cuts

Tertiary education不要裸奔 加不定冠词

改：Budget cuts discourage many young people to receive a tertiary education.

79. 有时候，很难去评估人类行为的环境代价。

正确的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities.

我的句子：Sometimes, it is difficult to assess the environmental cost caused by humans’ daily

behavior. 再用这个词写人类行为我就打死你

Sometimes adv 有时候， 偶尔 表频率

Some time 一段时间

Some times 几次

不能用sb is difficult

Cost 可数/不可数 表代价时 为了达成某个目的失去的东西 / 成本

Environmental cost 环境代价 不要用price. Price 指钱的价格

Raise environmental awareness环境的意识

评估 assess / evaluate 不强调结果，强调审核过程

Judge 评判，强调结果

人类行为：behavior 不可数n 短暂的行为

human activities 词伙

Behavior 不可数不能加s

改：Sometimes, it is hard to assess the environmental cost of human activities.

Environmental expenses 错误

Expense 话费 cost 成本/代价 expenditure 开支

Revenue收入 毛利（会计） government revenue政府收入

profit 利益 纯利润 （会计）

Behavior 不可数不能加s 且用human activities 词伙

改：Sometimes, it is hard to evaluate environmental cost of human activities

Environment cost 应为environmental cost

Sometimes才是正确写法

改：Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities.

80. 在大城市有一些贫困的社区。

正确的句子：There are some economically deprived communities in large cities.

我的句子：There are some disadvantaged (deprived) communities in big cities.

There be句型 不能出现两个v

贫困的社区：economically deprived 副词修饰形容词 或用poor也可以

Poverty n eg. The countries in poverty.贫穷的

Poverty-stricken贫穷的 countries / areas

Disadvantaged 修饰人 指的是一群因为没钱没法成功的人

Poverty 为n 不能修饰名词 改为 communities in poverty

改： There are some communities in poverty in a large city.

In poor condition. Condition为可数n 但不表示贫穷 表示状况糟糕

In （a） poor condition

改：In big cities, there are some communities in poverty.

81. 按照能力分班和学生的成绩没有明显的联系。

正确的句子：There is no clear link between grouping students by ability and their levels of

attainment.

我的句子： There is no obvious correlations前面是is 这里用复数？且单词用错 between

students’ grades表示分数 and grouping classes by abilities.

By ability by为做某事的方法 同 by car / bus / train 等

或用according to their abilities. 根据他们的能力

明显 obvious / clear / apparent

按能力分组 group students by ability 或用stream / track 这两个单词已经表达按照能力分班 后不用加ability

There is no clear link between streaming students and their levels of attainment.

分组不要用divide 把整体分成部分 divide into

classify 属于哪个小组或阶层的意思 此处运用不恰当

成绩：Academic performance / level of attainment（学识，成就）level 可数n别裸奔

Their level of attainment 前面有形容词性物主代词 后面名词可单可复

不要用score或者mark 表示分数 不表示学术表现

No 后可加可数名词单数/复数形式

82. 体育课可以促进身体健康，增强信心。

正确的句子：The PE class improves students’ physical conditions and boosts their

confidence.

我的句子：The PE class can improve students’ physical health and boost their confidence.

体育课PE class / PE lesson / PE course

Physical 表示body, not mind

Physical education表示体育这门科目 PE

Improve: makes sth better

Promote: encourage sth to increase / develop 此处用恰当 因为health是没法increase /

develop

促进身体健康：Improve one’s physical conditions/body health/physical fitness

Can 后面接动词原形

改：The PE class can improve physical health and boost confidence.

Promote 使用不准确 用improve

Health care 指医疗不指健康

改：PE classes can improve students’ physical conditions and boost their confidence.

Physical education 表示科目

主谓不一致

改：PE classes help to improve students’ physical health and boost their confidence.

83. 竞争激烈，一些城市处于弱势，因为缺少资源，比如：天然气和化石燃料。

正确的句子：The competition is intense and some countries are at a disadvantage because of

the lack of resources such as natural gas and fossil fuels.

我的句子：The competition is intense and some cities are at a disadvantage because they lack

nature（natural） resources such as nature这是名词啊！natural gas and fossil fuels

处于弱势：At a disadvantage 词伙 表示sb has a disadvantage

Advantaged 优越性的（adj） 有钱有地位

Disadvantaged 贫穷的

竞争激烈 stiff / intense / fierce （程度较深）competition

Competition表示竞争是为单数不可数n 不能加s

表达比赛意时，为可数n eg. a photography competition

城市cities / countries

缺少 lack 用法同access lack sth（vt） a/ the lack of sth （n）

Eg. She lacks sth（vt） Because of the / a lack of （n）

天然气 natural gas

化石资源：fossil fuels

Get trapped in 在...中困住 困在不好的情况 口语

Position 位置 有situation 的意思 be in a position to do sth 能做什么事情

Unfavorable position 没有这么用的 此处不适用 应用 at a disadvantage

改：The competition is intense and some cities are at a disadvantage because they lack nature

resources such as nature gas and fossil fuels.

Disadvantaged 贫穷的 不表示不利的意思

缺少 lack 用法同access lack sth（vt） a/ the lack of sth （n）

Eg. She lacks sth（vt） Because of the / a lack of （n）

天然气 nature gas

改：Some cities are at a disadvantage due to the lack of nature gas and fossil fuels.

84. 在发展中国家开设新的分公司可以降低生产成本,产生巨大的利润。

正确的句子：Opening new branches in developing countries can reduce the cost of

production and generate huge profit/generate a huge profit.

我的句子：Setting up new companies in developing countries can reduce production cost and

create没有这个表达 huge profits

动名词做主语 谓语动词单数

开新公司 open / start / set up / establish new company/branches

Branch 已经表示公司的意思了 不要加company

降低生产成本：The cost of production / production cost / manufacturing cost

Profit 可数/不可数 利润

Make a profit / make profit 或Earn/ Generate huge profit 产生利润

发展中国家：Developing countries

发达国家：Developed countries

Branch 已经表示公司的意思了 不要加company

The cost of 为固定搭配

巨大的 用big 或huge

产生不用create 用 make / generate

改： Running new branches in developing countries can reduce the cost of production and

generate profit.

85. 生活方式的轻微变化也能够产生巨大的变化，并且可以减少我们日常活动对环境的影响。

正确的句子：Small lifestyle changes can make a huge difference and can reduce the

environmental impact of our daily activities.

我的句子： Slight changes in lifestyles can lead to没有这个表达 huge difference and reduce

the environmental impact caused by可以这样表达 但是啰嗦 一个of可以搞定了 our daily

activities.

Some changes in lifestyles can make huge differences.

Change表式改变时有可数/不可数

Small changes in lifestyles can …

Environmental impact 环境影响 词伙

Health effect 健康影响 词伙

日常活动 daily activities

Daily 为adj

当daily 为副词时 表示每日的 eg. On a daily（adj） basis 词伙（每天）

轻微的 small / slight adj

一些 a little 表示肯定的含义 表示有一些 后面加不可数名词

Little 否定含义 几乎没有 后面加不可数名词

Few 用在肯定句 表示少 后面加可数名词复数形式

A few 用在肯定句 表示有一点 后面加可数名词复数形式

Light 灯光（n） 很轻的（adj）eg. Light feather

产生巨大的变化 make a big/major change / make a huge/big/major difference

小 没有 the little 且用在否定语言中较多 只有little / a little

Lifestyle别裸奔

Environmental impact用词伙较准确

改：Small changes in lifestyles can make a huge difference and reduce the environmental

impact of our daily activities.

Fine changes 没有这种表达 fine表示小的时候是很难注意到和难以理解的意思 用在这里不恰当 fine （adj） 表示很好 动词时为罚款

没有 bring huge differences 这种表达 一般用 make a huge difference

Difference 前一般加make / show

Relieve impact 没有这种表达 一般用reduce / mitigate （使缓和，使减轻）impact

Relieve 为减轻身上重担的意思 感到很欣慰

A small lifestyle changes 前面用a 后面加复数 5.5分

Impact to the environment for our daily activities 太啰嗦 一般用词伙 environmental

impact of

改：Small changes in lifestyles can make a huge difference and reduce the environmental

impact of our daily activities.

Slightly 为副词 不能修饰名词

改：Slight changes in lifestyles can make a huge difference and reduce the environmental

impact of our daily activities.

86. 因为没有实习机会，对他们来说提升工作技能是很难的。

正确的句子：It is difficult for them to improve job skills because there are no work

placements.

我的句子:Because they are no work placements, it is hard for them to improve their job

skills.

实习机会：work placements 可数名词 别裸奔 或者internship 可数名词

Intern 实习生

工作技能 job skills / employment skills

用are 不用is 是因为 placements 为可数名词复数 there be句型 是就近原则 be动词的

形式跟最近的名词保持一致

Skill 可以用 learn / hone / develop a skill 学习 发展技能

87. 大学生没办法赚到钱即使他们获得文凭。

正确的句子：University students cannot earn money even though they have gained

qualifications.

我的句子:Though 表示尽管的意思，不是即使的意思undergraduates have gained

qualifications, they cannot earn any money.

Qualification 文凭（可数n）

Degree 学位 （postgraduate degree） certificate 证书（eg. 计算机二级）

大学生：undergraduates / university students / college students 可数 graduates 表示毕业了的人 postgraduates研究生

即使 even if / even though 连词 前可加逗号

获得文凭：get / gain / obtain / acquire qualifications have 是有，不是获得的意思

定语从句运用不当导致语意偏差 这里的意思是 挣得可以帮助他们获得学位的钱。

改：University students cannot earn money even though they have gained qualifications.

Graduate students不表示大学生 用undergraduates

前面一般现在时 后面过去时 时态混乱

Earn money 中间不用加the

文凭此处不能用diploma

改：Undergraduates cannot earn money even though they have acquired qualifications

88. 因为竞争是激烈和技术的迅速发展，现在经营一家公司是一个艰巨的任务。

正确的句子：Running an organisation in today’s world can be a daunting task, because the

competition is stiff and technology is developing rapidly.

我的句子:Because of the stiff competition and the fast development of the technology, it is a

hard task to run a company.

Nowadays 现在 或 in today’s world

Daunting task表示让你没有那么自信的任务（词伙）

Because引导原因状语接句子

或者用because of 后面接短语

technological development 词伙 科技发展

89. 事实是，一些工作已经被砍掉，因为机械化的原因。

正确的句子：The fact is that some jobs have been made redundant because of mechanisation.

我的句子:In fact, some jobs have been cut because of mechanization.

表语从句不能省略that

Fact 可以引导同位语 比如due to the fact that 后面就是fact的内容

被砍掉 redundant（adj失业的） 不会再给你提供工作 被裁掉 很地道

Some jobs have been cut

机械化 mechanization （n） / mechanized（v）使机械化 / 自动化=automatic

Mechanism （可数n）机械装置

Abolish 表示废除某项法律 用词不当 应该用have been cut 或者 have been made

redundant

改：In fact some jobs have been cut because of mechanization.

90. 确实如此，现在很多人选择走向环保和减少能源的使用。

正确的句子：It is true that many people today have chosen to go green and cut down on the

use of energy.

我的句子:It is true that a large number of people choose an environment-friendly

environmentally friendly lifestyle一般说live an Eco-friendly lifestyle and reduce the use of

energy sources.

It is true that 套句 不能全篇用！

Go green走向环保

Eco-friendly /Environmentally friendly环境友好型

Cut down （on） 减少能源的使用 reduce the use of

Cut down 也表示砍伐

Choose chose chosen

Indeed 事实上 不适合大作文

environmental-friendly 错误 是environmentally friendly

Utilities指家用的 冰箱彩电等 语义不正确

改：It is true that many people today have chosen to go green and cut down on the use of

energy.

Choose to do才是正确用法

Walk toward environmental protection 太直译 没有这么表达 用eco-friendly 或go green

改：It is true that many people choose to go green and reduce the use of energy.